I have collected feedback from my target audience to find out their opinions on my double page spread and whether or not they would be attracted to read the article. As well as finding out their opinions, many of my target audience also made suggestions in which I can improve. Some of the most useful comments include:
"The double page is very eye-catching and the images work well, however maybe you could change the colour of the glow on the second page to a lighter colour"
"You could change the letter of who is being interviewed to make it stand out more"
"The introduction box works well but perhaps you could change the outline to being yellow as it looks a bit much with the orange title as well"
"You could make the lettering of who is being interviewed slightly larger"
I received many comments about changing the letter to a different colour or a bigger font so I will work on this and the other suggestions I have received.
Wednesday, 4 March 2009
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