Feedback From Target Audience

I have collected feedback from my target audience to find out their opinions on my final front cover. Many of my target audience also suggested improvements which was helpful. I have selected a few of the comments which were the most useful:

"The page is eye catching and instantly attracted me to look at it, however I think the red text is too bright and rather than being attracted to the image first, I was drawn to the text"

"I'm not sure if the font of Luke Jackson fits into the other texts on the page"

"The white text to the left hand side is quite hard to read at a first glance"

"I think a brighter colour would look better along the top and bottom of the page as the current colours tend to blend into the background"

I received many positive comments about my final product saying it was eye catching, however I also received many suggestions about the colour of the text "Luke Jackson" and the white font being hard to read. I will work on these comments and the others I have received to improve my product.