Final Product- Improved

This is the front page I will use for my final product. I may still change the title "Luke Jackson" to a slightly darker colour but myself and my target audience think that it looks effective and is easy to read.
I have taken the feedback from my target audience and made the changes suggested. I have also made a few changes which I thought would help my product look more aesthetically pleasing. I am pleased with the results of my front page and think it will attract my target audience.